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Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 2: Silence of War

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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby Luigi_Freak_The_23rd » Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:24 pm

So it was a dream then it really happened?
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Luigi_Freak_The_23rd wrote:Poor Watermelon gods couldn't didn't see it coming

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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby LegacyStrike » Sat Oct 11, 2008 10:26 pm

Luigi_Freak_The_23rd wrote:So it was a dream then it really happened?

It happened. I just rewrote the event just starting from the begining of the day.
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby Chuey » Sun Oct 12, 2008 10:33 am

More of a sneak peek IMO xP

Nice job. Now feature me NS:P
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby RayquazaMaster » Wed Oct 15, 2008 7:42 pm

Feature me, too! Oh, and please don't make me die. :-(
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby Storm39 » Fri Oct 24, 2008 7:02 pm

When is the next chapter coming?
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby LegacyStrike » Sat Oct 25, 2008 8:12 am

Storm39 wrote:When is the next chapter coming?

I've just started to work on it. Educate;
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby LegacyStrike » Sun Oct 26, 2008 5:43 pm

Chapter 2 is here:

Chapter 2: Silence of War
It was quiet. The forest floor was covered with fallen leaves. A hooded man rides his horse through the leaves and with each step of the horse a noise of crunching is made from the leaves. He sits quietly on his horse as he rides into the village in ruins. He continues looking ahead not even turning to look around. His horse starts to slow down. The man walked his horse over to a small patch of hay. The hay looked fine, so he tied his horse to a weak fence to let it eat. The man sat on the ground leaning against the frail fence. He took a towel out of his pocket. Inside was a piece of bread. The man ate the bread while drinking out of a canteen of what was probably water. The man went to get up, but noticed something over near the brush. He walked over to notice what it was, a dead person.

The man prayed over the body and walked away. He looked down in grief as he went back to his horse. As he walked back to his horse he noticed an odd creature walking around with box. He knew it wasn’t human. He silently walked to the creature. As his angle of perspective changed, he discovered the creature had a cage full of dying villagers, hungry and bleeding. The man drew a small knife out of his pocket and went to the creature. Some villagers noticed him and he nodded as a sign to keep quiet. The man got behind the creature about to mount his skeleton horse and stabbed him in the neck. The creature fell to the ground. He then proceeded to open the cage. As soon as it was opened a boy came out just about the same age as the dead body he saw just a few minutes ago running back to where the man had came from.

The boy went to the corpse and collapsed at the sight of it. The boy was crying. The man wanted to help the poor boy, so he ran down the hill to the boy. Just as he almost got to him a gun shot was fired and it barely missed the man. It was more creatures. Some of the creatures were on horses and some on foot. All wear holding rifles. They fired at the man as he tried to run to cover. The boy heard and got up and ran. The man and boy both were running into the forest behind the village. Stumbling over fallen logs they tried to escape, but it was futile. They were both caught. Bags were placed on to the man and boy’s head. They heard the sound of a gun click...
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 2: Silence of War

Postby PHOENIXBLAST » Sun Oct 26, 2008 6:15 pm

Interesting chapter. I will be interested as to what will happen next! Good chapter, I enjoyed it.
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 2: Silence of War

Postby RayquazaMaster » Sun Oct 26, 2008 7:01 pm

Something tells me that the crying boy is me. Who is it?
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 2: Silence of War

Postby LegacyStrike » Sun Oct 26, 2008 7:12 pm

RayquazaMaster wrote:Something tells me that the crying boy is me. Who is it?

Phoenix. Educate;
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