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Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 2: Silence of War

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Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 2: Silence of War

Postby LegacyStrike » Sat Oct 11, 2008 3:53 pm

…It was a dark day. The sky had a gloomy overtone to it. The world felt as if time itself had stopped moving. The wind was dead. The trees weren’t moving. The world stood still. Legacy looked over his shoulder at the destruction of his village. The barn he was hiding in had caught ablaze. The local general store was caught up in flames. The village was burning, nothing would be left standing. Legacy thought about what he had to do. He ran into the village. Not even sure if the creatures were still around…still he went. Legacy sprinted as fast as he could to the house of his best friend Phoenix. He felt unsure that he was still there, but he went anyway. Phoenix’s house was scorching from the fire and the smoke was so dense you couldn’t see your hand in front of your face. Legacy ran past the burning desk to the stairs that were just about to catch fire. He ran up the stairs to Phoenix’s bedroom. It was untouched by the oncoming fire. Legacy grabbed a backpack that looked like it had been just packed. Just then the floor panels were giving way below him. He thought quick and decided to jump out the glass window. He smashed the window with the backpack and leaped out. Legacy landed on some bushes only suffering some minor cuts. He got up and ran to the village gates.

Legacy swiftly ran to the village gates avoiding all the debris on the ground. He stopped in his tracks as he saw the creatures. They had a horse that was all bones. It was hooked up to a cage on wheels. Inside that cage was his best friend, Phoenix. Legacy was so furious; out of blind furry he ran up to the creature on the horse and threw a forceful punch at it. The creature fell off the horse because of the unexpected force of Legacy’s blow. Legacy then ran to the other side of the horse and threw another punch at the creature’s face. The creature took the hit and knocked Legacy off with amazing force and speed. Legacy stumbled to the ground trying to recover. He got up and sprinted to the barn of which he had come. The creature couldn’t run as fast as Legacy and he was able to escape...or so it had seemed. Legacy herd the noise of rushing horse feet trampling in the debris of the destroyed village. The creature drew a sword a hit Legacy with a swift blow to the face before racing ahead of him. Legacy fell to the ground…dead.

Nsider Chronicles.

Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End
The sun was rising on the quiet village. It was going to be a beautiful day. Legacy awoke to the sun shining right in his eyes.
“Aw...crap...what a way to wake up...” (Legacy)
So, Legacy got out of bed half-asleep. Still in his t-shirt and jeans (which he had fallen asleep with) he walked down the stairs. He almost got to the bottom floor where he noticed his best friend Phoenix was over. He quickly ran to Phoenix to say hello.
“Hey, why are you here Phoenix?” (Legacy)
“My parents are going out of town for a deliver today, your mom offered to let me stay the day here.” (Phoenix)
“Awesome!” “So...what do you want to do first...well, after I get changed?” (Legacy)
“I don’t really care. We could go to the lake or something...” (Phoenix)
“K, fine. We’ll do that.” (Legacy)
Legacy ran up the stairs and quickly got dressed. He put on a white shirt with a grey hoodie with a pair of skinny jeans and flat-bottom shoes. He then ran back down the stairs to go outside. So, Phoenix and Legacy went down the rocky horse-made path to the lake. When they got to the lake they noticed the gates to the town were closed and being patrolled by two large men with swords.
“Hey!” (Legacy)
“Yes, hello?” (Security Guard #1)
“Yeah, err….what’s going on?” (Legacy)
“There was a slight disturbance at the town ahead, just to be safe we closed the gates...So no trade today.” (Security Guard #1) *The Security Guard looked like he was running out of excuses*
“Oh, ok then. Thanks.” (Legacy) *Nodding his head like he believed what the Security Guard had said.*
“Not a problem, but for your own safety we ask if you cannot be around here for today.”
“Fine, we’ll go somewhere else.”
Legacy and Phoenix look at each other confused and walk away from the Security Guards.
“You didn’t trust a thing they said, do you?” (Legacy)
“Not at all. Something is going on.” (Phoenix)
“Nothing we can do now, let’s go find something else to do.” (Legacy)
“Yeah, fine.” (Phoenix)
Legacy and Phoenix then go down the stone path again. They arrive at the dirt field. There were a group of kids playing baseball. Legacy and Phoenix then decide to watch the game. They both sat down on an old fallen tree log. Legacy and Phoenix were talking about the gates. They both came up with the same conclusion. They thought it was a band of thieves. It seemed right because it wouldn’t have been the first time something like that has happened.
By the time the game had ended the sun was setting.
“Wow, this late all ready?” (Phoenix)
“My mom probably has dinner ready.” (Matt)
“Let’s Go.”

Phoenix and Legacy arrive at the house. They both go inside. They were surprised on what they saw. Legacy’s mom had packed up the house.
“WHAT THE **** IS GOING ON?” (Legacy)
“We got to get out of here. We’re going to be attacked.” (Mom)
“How bad could it be?! Our security can take of it.” (Legacy)
“No. They can’t. We got to go now.” (Mom)
“Phoenix, return to your house. Your parents should be back shortly.”
“Um…ok” (Phoenix)
Phoenix races out of the house. Legacy is clueless on what’s going on. He just continues loading the horse’s carriage with suitcases. Legacy is just about to put in a heavy suitcase when he hears a loud explosion.
“..That was the gate.”
“We got to go...There’s no time.” (Mom)
“..But Phoenix…” (Legacy)
“He’s fine. We just have to go. I’m sorry.” (Mom)
Legacy’s Mom starts the horse. Quicker and quicker the horse gallops and others follow...On foot and on horse. It was chaos. Legacy notices that Phoenix’s lights are still on…he’s still home. Legacy panics as he sees and explosion on the top of the mountain.
“I got to save him...” (Legacy)
Legacy dives off the carriage into a fence that breaks on impact. Legacy’s mom did not notice that he had jumped with all the confusion. Legacy got up and started to run towards Phoenix’s house. He passes a barn when hears a massive explosion. Half the village was set ablaze. Legacy watched as his house went up in fire. Phoenix’s house was next. Legacy saw an object flying through the air…it was a grenade. Legacy ran into the barn to avoid the explosion. He locked the doors and hid in the corner in a pile of hay. All around him he heard screams explosions and swords clashing. He hid of about twenty minutes. The air had been silent. He heard only the crackle of fire. He stealthy retreated out of the barn to a small farm on a hill. He tried to see if anything was going on. All that he saw was the village in flames. He ran to Phoenix’s house. Legacy didn’t even check if anything was hiding waiting for someone to return. He just sprinted. Legacy had found Phoenix. Being trapped in cage. Legacy was angry. Stupidly he tried to fight the creature stealing his best friend. Moments later...Legacy died.


Chapter 2: Silence of War
It was quiet. The forest floor was covered with fallen leaves. A hooded man rides his horse through the leaves and with each step of the horse a noise of crunching is made from the leaves. He sits quietly on his horse as he rides into the village in ruins. He continues looking ahead not even turning to look around. His horse starts to slow down. The man walked his horse over to a small patch of hay. The hay looked fine, so he tied his horse to a weak fence to let it eat. The man sat on the ground leaning against the frail fence. He took a towel out of his pocket. Inside was a piece of bread. The man ate the bread while drinking out of a canteen of what was probably water. The man went to get up, but noticed something over near the brush. He walked over to notice what it was, a dead person.

The man prayed over the body and walked away. He looked down in grief as he went back to his horse. As he walked back to his horse he noticed an odd creature walking around with box. He knew it wasn’t human. He silently walked to the creature. As his angle of perspective changed, he discovered the creature had a cage full of dying villagers, hungry and bleeding. The man drew a small knife out of his pocket and went to the creature. Some villagers noticed him and he nodded as a sign to keep quiet. The man got behind the creature about to mount his skeleton horse and stabbed him in the neck. The creature fell to the ground. He then proceeded to open the cage. As soon as it was opened a boy came out just about the same age as the dead body he saw just a few minutes ago running back to where the man had came from.

The boy went to the corpse and collapsed at the sight of it. The boy was crying. The man wanted to help the poor boy, so he ran down the hill to the boy. Just as he almost got to him a gun shot was fired and it barely missed the man. It was more creatures. Some of the creatures were on horses and some on foot. All wear holding rifles. They fired at the man as he tried to run to cover. The boy heard and got up and ran. The man and boy both were running into the forest behind the village. Stumbling over fallen logs they tried to escape, but it was futile. They were both caught. Bags were placed on to the man and boy’s head. They heard the sound of a gun click...
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Intro

Postby NoCompz43 » Sat Oct 11, 2008 4:09 pm

Wow, that was pretty cool. And why aren't I in it?
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Intro

Postby Wurmple Dude » Sat Oct 11, 2008 4:57 pm

Your dead? Why did you kill yourself?

Please don't kill my guy. :(
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby LegacyStrike » Sat Oct 11, 2008 8:57 pm

Chapter 1 is up. Enjoy!!
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby GigaMetroid99 » Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:04 pm

So... You gonna die ever chapter, then? :D:

Random trivia: Legacy's name changes to Matt for one sentence. Educate;
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby LegacyStrike » Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:06 pm

Giga_Metroid99 wrote:So... You gonna die ever chapter, then? :D:

Random trivia: Legacy's name changes to Matt for one sentence. Educate;

Good someone caught it. It will be mentioned later.

Also, it was just like replay on the intro. :D:
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby GigaMetroid99 » Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:08 pm

LegacyStrike wrote:
Giga_Metroid99 wrote:So... You gonna die ever chapter, then? :D:

Random trivia: Legacy's name changes to Matt for one sentence. Educate;

Good someone caught it. It will be mentioned later.

Also, it was just like replay on the intro. :D:

Wait, does that mean the intro was a sneak peek, or that you dreamed it and then it really happened? Are you going to stay dead this time? NS:P
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby PHOENIXBLAST » Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:09 pm

Wow. I really like it. I can't wait till chapter 2 comes up! So far so good and the story has what a good story needs. I don't really know what that is but I know that so far it has it. xP =P Keep up the good work! =)

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^Not mine, saw it on a video xP
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby Luigi_Freak_The_23rd » Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:17 pm

You... died 0_o ... again...
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Re: Nsider Chronicles: Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End

Postby LegacyStrike » Sat Oct 11, 2008 9:21 pm

Luigi_Freak_The_23rd wrote:You... died 0_o ... again...

It's a replay of the intro..if you get what I'm saying.
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