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The Second NSider Community Fan-Fic: Silenced [Completed]

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Re: The Second NSider Community Fan-Fic: Silenced [Completed]

Postby Storm39 » Sun Oct 04, 2009 1:22 am

Like Star said, that was an amazing chapter. I hope that we write another one in the future. The best thing about the ending was the openness of it. Writing a sequel shouldn't be too difficult.
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Re: The Second NSider Community Fan-Fic: Silenced [Completed]

Postby Roboryantron » Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:42 am

Chuey wrote:This was not going to be a fight to forget!

But it was forgotten, as their was no explanation of what happened.
And since when can a pebble be the size of a 17" computer monitor? :D:

But anyway, great chapter, although you had several spelling/grammar mistakes and misuses of words. But I really liked the ending. I can't wait until we start a new fan fic!
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Re: The Second NSider Community Fan-Fic: Silenced [Completed]

Postby Chuey » Sun Oct 04, 2009 9:50 am

@ Star: Yes, all in one day.
@ Star and Storm: Thanks. NS:P
@ Robor: There are things that were not explained because you must assume something happened in a scene. Did you not become curious as to how AB and Robor are fighting Kyukon and go to being trapped? Also, I can't wonder how there were spelling mistakes if words I thought I were spelling correct were being pointed out by Microsoft Word. There may have very well been grammar errors, but I didn't catch any in my read since it all flowed through very nice. Misuses of words? Point one out please? 0.o And thanks!

Okay, that's all I have to add. Thanks everyone again. The first two posts were modified last evening to accommodate for the completion of the story.
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Re: The Second NSider Community Fan-Fic: Silenced [Completed]

Postby AlakazamBrain » Sun Oct 04, 2009 10:13 am

As everyone else has said, amazing job Chuey!

This concludes an incredible fanfic. Between the sexual imagery (mostly from me :P) and the sophisticated plot... this was incredible. Amazing work everyone!
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Re: The Second NSider Community Fan-Fic: Silenced [Completed]

Postby RayquazaMaster » Sun Oct 04, 2009 2:59 pm

Yay, I was one of the members that helped save NSC! :D:
BTW, how did you know that I often have dreams with flower-filled fields?
I loved the last chapter!
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Re: The Second NSider Community Fan-Fic: Silenced [Completed]

Postby Chuey » Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:04 pm

LoL, I just kind of pictured it to match your personality. Sorry if I insulted you at all, I made sure your character made nothing of it. Thank you for the opinion! NS:P
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Re: The Second NSider Community Fan-Fic: Silenced [Completed]

Postby RayquazaMaster » Mon Oct 05, 2009 6:15 pm

Chuey wrote:LoL, I just kind of pictured it to match your personality. Sorry if I insulted you at all, I made sure your character made nothing of it. Thank you for the opinion! NS:P

Lol, really? Wow! Don't worry, I don't feel insulted.
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