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The Fire

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The Fire

Postby NoCompz43 » Tue Nov 17, 2009 9:25 pm

The Fire

There are few things I've come to realize in my short life
And I know I'll try my best to make sure they come out right
But, the sad truth is, that they don't come out how I want them to be
But last night I realized, you're the girl for me

Because last night by the fire we spent our time together,
Hoping this would last forever,
Because i showed you how to laugh and you showed me how to live.
And just for one more night I would give and give.
Now if I could just make you see,
That you're the girl for me.

You got me with your eyes,
You got me with hair,
Next to other girls, they couldn't compare.
Because when I'm with you, you make it all seem right,
Now if I could convince you, To give me one more night.

Because last night by the fire we spent our time together,
Hoping this would last forever,
Because i showed you how to laugh and you showed me how to live.
And just for one more night I would give and give.
Now if I could just make you see,
That you're the girl for me.

Because tonight by the fire we spent our time together,
Knowing it would last forever,
Because we showed each other how to love,
And we know many nights are soon to come,
And I think we have come to see,
We were meant to be...

Original song by my band. Written by myself. Copyright 2009, Before The Fall
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Re: The Fire

Postby Chuey » Wed Nov 18, 2009 7:23 am

Sang this in my head to music. Sounds really good, now, do you have a vocalist? Being honest, not sure if your voice would fit this song... <_<

I won't start up again on the copyright thing.
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Re: The Fire

Postby NoCompz43 » Wed Nov 18, 2009 5:12 pm

Chuey wrote:Sang this in my head to music. Sounds really good, now, do you have a vocalist? Being honest, not sure if your voice would fit this song... <_<

I won't start up again on the copyright thing.


Yes, my band has a vocalist, I only sing small back-up parts. And really anything you create originally and post is technically copyrighted from yourself. Because I validation that I wrote the lyrics or something like that, I don't really remember.

Oh and by the way:



It's only really the intro, but you get a basic idea of the mood, chord changes, etc...
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